Writings


In this section, you can find some writings which I have done and the teacher's corrections.



  Some Corrections in the writings
WRONG
  •  There are a lot of placex to sightseeing
  • People is very friendly there
  • After have lunch
  • The classes were ending early
  • She has a long and wavy blond hair
  • Hi Paul:
  • Dear Sir,
  • I would to learn about how apply these technics...
  • I have looked at your website general information but I did not find anything about this question.
  • We will be on holidays in this month.
  • Do you accept animals in the accommodations?
  • If possible I would like to carry our dog. It is a friendly dog with other persons and do not make any noise.
  • Yesterday in the morning...
  • If you find it, you can carry to the information point.
  • I'll stay sleeping at home with them and until tomorrow I won't return home.
  • My colleagues in the high school...
  • We could remember many things about the years which we passed in this school.
  • When we finished dining...
  • There was a party and we danced all the night.
  • The night passed quickly....
  • I have thought to go abroad and to do a big party...
  • I'll see you there?
  • It has a large coast....
  • Interesting touristic city...
  • We can spend much time walking in the city...
  • We must do hard working with a teacher who is very hard with us.
  • I have tea to be relaxed...
  • What must I do more to have a really healthy lifestyle?
  • I can buy a loaf of bread and a few egges to do something to have dinner.
  • Bonnie was working at the Marco's café.
  • Clyde worn a hat and a smart suit.
  • They were passing front a car....(???)
  • Clyde proposed to Bonnie to steal the car.
  • Fuel station...
  • Next week my holidays start....
  • Why we don't do....?
  • A few seconds we stayed in this place...
  • Lovely and shining day...
  • To end...
  • In the middle of two gimnasts.
CORRECT
  •  There are a lot of placex to go sightseeing
  • The people are very friendly there
  • After lunch
  • The classes finished early
  • She has long and wavy blond hair
  • Hi Paul,
  • Dear Sir, Madam
  • I would like to learn how to use these tecniques...
  • I have looked at your website for general information but I did not find anything about this.
  • We will be on holiday in that month.
  • Are animals allowed in the accommodation?
  • If possible I would like to take our dog. It is a friendly dog with other people and does not make any noise.
  • Yesterday morning...
  • If you find it, you can take it to the information point.
  • I'll spend the night at home with them and I won't retun home until tomorrow.
  • My classmates at the high school.
  • We could remember many things about the years which we spent in that school.
  • When we finished having dinner.
  • There was a party and we danced all night.
  • The night went by quickly
  • I have thought of going abroad and to have a big party...
  • Will I see you there?
  • It has a long coast...
  • Interesting tourist city...
  • We can spend a lot of time walking in the city...
  • We must do hard work with a teacher who is very hard to us.
  • I have tea to get relaxed.
  • What else must I do to have a really healthy lifestyle?
  • I can buy a loaf of bread and a few eggs to cook something for dinner.
  • Bonnie was working at Marco's café.
  • Clyde was wearing a hat and a smart suit.
  • They were going past front a car....(???)
  • Clyde suggested that they could steal...
  • Petrol station...
  • Nex week I'll be on holiday...
  • Why don't we do...
  • We stayed in this place for a few seconds ...
  • Lovely and sunny day...
  • To finish up...
  • Between two gymnasts.